Review of the CS project progress

Start with the recently changes of animatic. I mainly changed the half-later part.

This is the first version of this part.

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Then I decided to emphasis how the music treats and helps her. It’s not enough to only show her expression. So I let the strings appears from her ears and with the moving of it the shadow disappears. Then she stands up and pats the dirt off her body. I want to express she is not afraid anymore, the pressure and scare leave her just like the dirt she just patted off.

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This is the third version. I add the scene that she is writing music and also change the camera angle to make this scene not too simple. I prefer not to let the character stay in the middle of the background all the time.

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Some keyframes of the bullying scene. I considered a lot about this part. I don’t want to show the violence elements so I focus on the shape-changing about character’s body. She becomes soft like a sponge, easily shaped and vulnerable.

Also I finished some animation of character. These three scene are simpler relatively.

About the background, I may not change it a lot, the problem is how the people fade when the character walking on the street and how bullying people appear and disappear. I think I should work on it first and then finish the rest animation of the character.

Grad film idea development

I have two ideas about graduation film so far. One is the story that happened after a man’s death and another one this the black hole story I did before. After the discussion with Clare, we both think that the first story is a bit well-known so I may continue with the black hole story.

This idea didn’t choose by the LIAF team but I really want to develop this idea. Clare helps me a lot to make this story more reasonable and the structure more clear. First, the character needs to discover his fear of the holes( although it’s all his illusion). At first, I’m thinking about letting something getting out of the hole in the sink.

But I should keep working on this part to make it more convincing. Why he feels that there is something inside the hole. This part is too simple and no reason.

And then he flees his house, then he begins to see holes everywhere. The anxious and fear is building. And he finds that fill the holes could help him have the sense of relief( I think this part is the climax of the story), he starts to do crazy things. About this part, I think I could add something interesting. Clare advised me to make a montage of scenes at this place and I think it will have a really strong visual impact. In this part, the most important thing is to let manic feeling build step by step instead of release suddenly.

Finally, he back home sitting on the sofa. This part should be very slow because a very intense part just finished. Everything seems peaceful at this moment until his eyes fall on the hole on the can he is holding. He didn’t escape this time and this hole is like magical, attracting him staring at it. I think the audience would like to know what exactly exists in the hole at this moment. And he sees another person in the hole and staring at him and suddenly everything surrounding him is like a whirlpool turning him around and around. When it stops, this man finds that he becomes the person who stays in the hole.

And about the character in the hole, at first, I thought it will look the same with the man. Clare suggested it could be a different character. I think it to some extent could avoid the confusion between these two characters so I may change it looks.

Development of CS project

After the tutorial I made some changes about aniamtic.

the previous one
the new one

I remembered when I delete the part which she is writing music I was thinking about to put it at the end of the story but I didn’t do it. But seems this thing is quite important for this girl so I changed this part to emphasis it. The strings still are the symbol of music and I put some geometric shape on it and they will move with the music. I think the changing of this part makes it more smooth especially the connecting with the scene that she passes this therapy to the other.

Also this part. I add more expression on her face and finished the animation of this part.

Review of the LIAF project

After one month we finally finished this animation and honestly I’m really satisfied with this project both the final work and the group members.

The final work still has some point that we can improve. If we got more times we could do better. The link: https://vimeo.com/490165853

For example at the beginning, the white birds at left should have more actions, their wings could move more to show that they are going to fly away. We have the wings moving sound effect at this place so if these birds show their moves more it will be better.

Also at the end, the red bird leads white birds flying. It takes time to draw them one by one, so the white birds all have the same speed and actions of the red bird. We should show some differences between them because they have a different personality, the red bird is the first one who jumps into the unknown and white birds are the followers. Personally thinking, if we draw them differently, the whole scene will be more abundant.

But these problems are not quite influent our work I think. The final piece looks like just what I imagined at the very first stage.

Animation of the character

I animated the character in Tvpaint. It was easier than I thought. But I still met some problems.

The draft in Tvpaint.

When I animating, I found the background moved too fast, although it followed the length which same as the animatic. The movement of the fragments was too much and too fast, and I didn’t realise it when I shooting. It has big influences on the character cuz the character flying as quick as the background. This problem leads to the lacking of the character’s mood, I didn’t have enough time to express the feelings and reaction of the character. And this is the final look of my part: https://vimeo.com/490029196

Director concluded an action description sheet for us.

This sheet is really helpful and has so many details. The bird should be shy and hesitant at first, it is exploring and struggling because of the hitting from the fragments and in the end, it should be brave and fast that it could reach the bright space. But it’s hardly showed in my final work. I tried to make the character slow but it didn’t fit into the background. It is obvious that every step in animation making is so relatively. I always need to fix some mistakes because of the impatience and careless that I was in the previous step. I have to avoid it when I work on the grad film.

Pictures processing

I processed some pictures with PS and I think it is interesting to use digital software to make this part look like a stop-motion.

This part is about the red bird jumping off from the platform. When the character flying the background should be moving forward quickly to show the movement of the character. If we do it in stop-motion we have to prepare the extra paper for this part and it will cost time to change it frame by frame. To avoid this we decided to use PS to do the effect.

It’s not a complex thing. I made three layers in PS. One for the original picture and two for the texture picture. At first I thought it was two layers. But the texture picture that I prepared is not big enough to move so I need another texture layer to fill the blank space. And also the clone stamp is really helpful during this stage, I made this texture picture with it too.

texture

Leave the triangle part blank frame by frame. Fortunately, there are not too many pictures in this part so it didn’t cost much time.

the texture pic is not big enough

And this is the final work.

We also use PS to do the clean and colour adjust to make the scene have more contrast so the colour could be brighter and background darker.

before
after

Digital software can really fix some mistakes that we did during the shooting. But don’t become dependent on it, it’s necessary to keep everything correct at the previous stage otherwise it will be so tired when you process those pictures frame by frame.

before
after

About my part.

My part starting from the red bird jump off the platform then finally reach the entrance of the bright place.

This part is really a challenge for me. The point is to show the space which means I need to use the moving of the shapes in the background to create a tunnel. I realised I have to cut those paper into different size, big to small, and make them moves through the specific track which like a spider web.

So the big amount of papercut is necessary. Also, the direction of the works we usually do is from left to right and this time is front to back. It’s a challenge for my imagination of space. Inspired by this videohttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e-4OHQNwObk. I want to make the tunnel more clear, but I didn’t find a suitable material. So I decided just to use one black paper for the background.

Honestly, its really tired when I cut papers. I was like a machine with scissors. And everywhere is messed up except space under the camera.

I choose two ways to shot, in normal and reverse order. And the way of cutting paper is the opposite. When I shot in the normal way, the size of the fragments is small to big. Then I need to prepare a set of paper cuts. I did a test, although they are not perfectly in the same shape it still works smoothly because the fragments move too fast. So I shoot in the normal way when the bird flying fast.

paper family

The reverse order is suitable for the slowly part. I thought it’s going to be easier than the normal order. It is quicker when I cutting papers but it’s really hard to control the rhythm. If I got a reference at this time it must be very helpful.

Start shooting- Jumping to the unknow

I remembered when we decide which method we are going to use, our group kind of struggled during that period. We received different advice and its hard to make a choice between digital drawing and traditional stop-motion way. Finally, we decided to combine them. It made me very excited cuz after I watched the pitch from another group, they use live-action which is really attractive. It reminds me of the essay we worked on about the animation documentary the last term. During the research, I found a lot of directors they choose this way to create their work and this special visual effect their works shows is really interesting and beautiful. Also, this is the first time I work this way and it’s a precious experience for me.

After the long break during summer, we started the official making of the LIAF project.

Sin is shooting the beginning part.

During filming, we found its really difficult to make it as same as our animatic although we imported it and used onion skin. At first, we tried drawing the reference layer, but it works for the part which has a slight movement of the fragments. Thinking about the latter part, we got so many different shapes of paper cut and natural cotton. If we draw the reference for the whole animation is gonna be a really big work, taking a long time. So we decided to shoot directly without the reference.

Leon Spilliaert exhibition

It was free exhibited at Royal Academy of arts which I think is really worth going.

I was surprised by his self-taught experience. It reminds me of Aubrey Beardsley was self-taught as well. They are really gifted people. Maybe this kind of freedom gives them power.

He is so good at atmosphere creating, especially the night-time scene. These works have a strong sense of space and quiet emotional and his expression is precise and clear that I can feel his mood.

Although he was renowned for the self-portrait, I think the other portraits works is not worse at all. The Absinthe Drinker is my favourite one. There is no extra skill in this painting but these colour blocks formed this woman who is so interesting and active. And this style reminds me of Edvard Munch.

Animating work of CS project

Some animating work based on the established part of animatic .

This is the beginning scene. The interesting thing is these two parts including the animation principle exercise that we did the last term. The lip-synch exercise is really helpful at that time so it’s not that difficult for me to draw this one. This is a side face and only had the head in the scene which is easier than the previous work I did.

previous lip-synch work

The walking part is not smooth enough and the character doesn’t go back to the starting point.It’s an unsuccessful loop needs to be improve.

And about this part, I already did some keyframes before but when I work on it I still need to record a video of my self. I try to bring her feelings to my mind like what I did during the LAS course and finally get a good one to use. I think the moment that she takes her hand out of the pocket is an important point. It’s a starting of the movement that she turns around and at this time her arms form a trace line of her body which I think worth to focus on.

old one
new one