Review of CS pitch

I finished the storyboard which I think is really a big progress.

And I got more information about this character: she writes her own music. I could add more things to the apart which she said her music is a big sort of therapeutic release to her. She could relax and peaceful when she is writing music the could have the contract with the later part(the school bullying) I think this animatic is a bit empty for now. Some part is too long without moving so I should add more contents.

These three frames which I think is the most important part of the animatic so I finished them first. They link together and also a contrast between two different mood.

I was thinking about how to express the school bullying scene and also had a look at some works about school bullying. This one made me empressed.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sPZm-B0zQN8

This film is really attractive and amazing, but the bullying scene is too directly to make the audience feel a real sense of stress and painful same as the character. I want to do it differently, just to show the shape of the bad guys. I may focus on the reaction e girls to show her pressures.

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *