Review of the LIAF project

After one month we finally finished this animation and honestly I’m really satisfied with this project both the final work and the group members.

The final work still has some point that we can improve. If we got more times we could do better. The link: https://vimeo.com/490165853

For example at the beginning, the white birds at left should have more actions, their wings could move more to show that they are going to fly away. We have the wings moving sound effect at this place so if these birds show their moves more it will be better.

Also at the end, the red bird leads white birds flying. It takes time to draw them one by one, so the white birds all have the same speed and actions of the red bird. We should show some differences between them because they have a different personality, the red bird is the first one who jumps into the unknown and white birds are the followers. Personally thinking, if we draw them differently, the whole scene will be more abundant.

But these problems are not quite influent our work I think. The final piece looks like just what I imagined at the very first stage.

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